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Wednesday 21 October 2015

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In O,neill class we have been learning how to do a OREO paragraph, it is a type of planning.OREO stands for opinion, reason, example and restate opinion. I used this to write a paragraph.
Colossal Squid!
I strongly believe the most astonishing creation in the world is the colossal squid.This is because it uses black ink to blind the enemies and predators.Also it has a big eyeball to see other fish in the depths of the big dangerous oceans.For example the tentacles can grapple because it has lethal big hooks on its tentacles holes.Therefore it is the most interesting and most astonishing squid in the world.

By Joseph C



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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 09:32

    Hi Joseph,
    WOW You have written a very good piece of writing. I really like ow you started with I strongly believe and giving your opinion. I think that you have have succeeded in the process of OREO. Can you put more examples of your writing on your blog please?

    Arnav (McCahon Class)

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    1. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 13:35

      Yes I will thank you for the ideas!

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  2. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 09:33

    Hi Joseph,
    WOW You have written a very good piece of writing. I really like ow you started with I strongly believe and giving your opinion. I think that you have have succeeded in the process of OREO. Can you put more examples of your writing on your blog please?

    Arnav (McCahon Class)

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